Esther Sylvester

Hey Skins! Here's Esther! First off, I would like to say that I loved the beginning of this chapter. The quote about funerals was interesting and it kept me interested. ...

Here's Esther to review, as promised. Excellent job by the way! I love the setting and the characters. Here are some things I found: “What?” he asked, chuckling. This is ...

Zibbie! This is my favorite chapter yet! I finally caught a glimpse with what the characters were really like. Great job! Here is something I noticed: Lizzie running out of ...

Hey! This was a very interesting piece. It was interesting because I don't normally read about gymnastics, so that is cool! The thing I noticed though is that there really ...

Hello Randomer! Okay, this was very good. There were barely any grammatical errors. I like some of the characters, while others don't make as much sense to me. Here are ...

Hello RedRaven! Before I get to review I would just like to say a few things. First off, welcome to the site! I'm sure you'll find everyone friendly and willing ...

Hey, this is Esther Sylvester! I haven't read the chapters before this, and something tells me I should, but I liked it quite a bit. I seriously enjoyed the spontaneous ...

Hey there! This is Esther Sylvester here to review you piece. This was great! First I was a little cautious because I was afraid it would be really, really cheesy, ...

Pretty good! Interesting development and characters. It flowed nicely and was pretty good! Here is a little thing that wasn't perfect though. If every time a lie fell out of ...

Hey comrie! It's Esther Sylvester here! Once again, another good piece. I can always rely on you to write something solid, C. It flowed very nicely, never getting to detailed ...

Hey SameOld. I'm Esther Sylvester and I will be reviewing your piece. Good job, I really must say. I feel the intense relationship between the two characters. I think I ...

Hi there! Okay, this was good but very, very short. In fact, it was so short that I got really no sense of what was going on. I liked the ...

Hey LoLo, I shall be reviewing you today. Compelling! It was very attention grabbing. I don't know much about the characters yet though. Do you plan on writing another chapter, ...

Hello Apple! I will be reviewing you today and you don't have to give me a elephant-er hippo if you review my work as well. (Nudge nudge wink wink) First ...

This was quite interesting, I must say. I was looking through the non fiction and your title caught my eye. I thought the last part was quite lovely. Sometimes I ...